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Lets get this party started

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Just a corgi I decided to draw, line, and color. Really proud of this one!
Image size
239x200px 16.59 KB
Make
Apple
Model
iPhone 3G
Aperture
F/2.8
Date Taken
Jun 4, 2011, 6:11:04 PM
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I really like the design and the coloration, very striking! I love the eyes, they look highly expressive. However the muzzle looks a little too long in my opinion and the chest line makes the front legs look like they are back a bit too far. The length of the muzzle, I believe, makes the head seem too big for the body, but this may just be because I am used to shorter muzzles. And it looks kind of fat because the stomach is one straight line, but I think you may have been going for a shaggy dog perhaps, judging by the chest and cheeks? I love how you did the cheeks,it helps to distingish the neck from the head. I also love your legs, they are AMAZING! And the paws are just too cute! All in all a very cute piece!